With years of experience in admissions counseling, Sara has helped numerous students achieve their academic dreams. A well written personal statement is an invaluable component to a successful graduate application. She can assist you in editing your essay to perfection! As a published author and experienced college application editor, she can help make your personal statement truly shine.

凭借多年的招生咨询经验,Sara已经帮助很多学生达到他们的学术的梦想。精心写作的个人陈述是申请美国研究生的重要部分。Sara可以帮助你编辑你的文章直到完美!作为一个出版作者和经验丰富的大学申请编辑,她可以帮助使你的个人陈述不同凡响。

About Sara
Born and raised in San Francisco, I am a native English speaker. I completed a BA in Economics and Sociology from University of California, Davis, graduating with Highest Honors in both majors. I was awarded the Sociology thesis award, which is given to only one student in the department. Directly after graduation, I continued my studies at Stanford University, where I received a Masters in International Education. My Stanford Masters thesis is published with VDM Publishing House and is currently being sold on Amazon.com. After Stanford, I became an Admission Counselor, where I guided students through the extensive American college application process. I assisted students to research colleges, reviewed and edited personal statements and scholarship applications, and advised students on course planning and test scheduling. I also have experience working directly with ESL students as an English teacher at the University of Macau.

关于Sara

出生并成长在旧金山, Sara 以英语为母语. 她拥有加州大学Davis分校（UC Davis）的经济及社会学双学士学位,并以最高荣誉毕业. 此后她在斯坦福大学(Standford University)取得国际教育学硕士学位. 她的斯坦福大学的硕士论文由VDM出版社出版，目前正在在Amazon.com上出售。斯坦福大学毕业后, 她曾任招生顾问帮助学生选择学校,修改编辑个人陈述和奖学金的申请并建议学生对课程的规划. 她也曾于澳门大学教授了一年大学英语课程.


Information about my published book on Amazon.com:
Breaking Down the Homogenized View of Asian American Academic Success
By: Sara Atienza

Services Provided

服务一览

- Rough Draft To Finish Package $USD150 per essay
This package is perfect for those who already have a rough draft of the personal statement and have the structure of the essay mind. Specifically, if a person seeks great advice on content, context, uniqueness, cohesiveness this is the package for you. Student will have unlimited access till the essay is perfected.

文书互动修改服务 150美元:

该服务适用于已经有大体结构及内容草稿的个人陈述. 特别是, 如果你需要寻求在于内容,语境,独特性,一致性等方面的指导, 这个服务将会是您完美的选择. 学生有无限次的互动修改直到文章达到满意.

- Pure Editing Package $USD40 per essay
If you believe you are finished with your essay and would like me to review your personal statement for grammatical corrections, this is the perfect package for you.

深度润色修改服务40美元:

如果你认为你已经完成了你的文章并只需要我给予语法上的改正, 这将是你最佳的选择.

- Get Started Package $USD70 per essay
I have helped numerous students get started on their personal statements. My approach entails asking the client numerous questions and taking notes as he/she answers. After careful consideration and analysis of the client's situation, I advise as to the approach the client should take with regard to the personal statement. I do not limit my time with my clients. Therefore, after the initial conversation, the interaction does not stop, the client may contact me at any time regarding the approach to his/her personal statement.

起始创作服务70美元：

万事开头难,我曾帮助过许多同学开始他们的个人陈述写作. 我的方法包括询问关键性的问题并予以记录,在仔细的考虑及分析顾客的情况后, 我会建议顾客关于采用何种方法来创作个人陈述. 我将不会限制我与客户交流的时间. 因此, 在最初的分析交流后, 互动并没有结束, 顾客可以随时联系我咨询有关其个人陈述写作方法的问题.

Essays will be returned within in 5-7 business days. If you would like rush services (1-2 days), there is an additional fee of $20USD.

文章将会在5-7个工作天内交还.如果你需要加急服务(1-2天) ,需收取额外的20美元加急费.

- Admissions Counseling (starting at $200)
With thousands of universities in America, it is a daunting process to select which program to apply to. With my counseling, I will carefully assess your needs, preferences and personality and research the appropriate colleges. I will provide my top college recommendations with a list of application requirements and deadlines. Coaching for school interviews can also be provided.
Consultations will be conducted on Skype, MSN Messenger, or Gmail chat.

申请咨询(请联系我,以取得报价):

在数千个美国大学的项目中选择你想要申请的项目将会是个令人畏惧的过程. 通过该咨询服务, 我将会仔细分析你的需求,喜好,以及个人性格并深入研究合适你的大学. 我将会给予一张建议申请的大学的列表并附上相关项目的要求以及申请截止日期. 我也可以提供录取面试的指导. 咨询将会在Skype , MSN 以及Gmail Chat 上进行.

How to sign up:

1) Select the package that you would like to sign up for.
2) Use the paypal link below to pay. *Note: PayPal account is not needed to purchase a package. Chinese mainland credit cards are accepted. Macau credit cards are not accepted.*
3) If you signed up for the Editing or Rough Draft packages, email your essay to stanfordeditor1@gmail.com within 24 hours of payment. If you signed up for the Getting Started package, I will contact to set up your initial consultation within 24 hours.

服务流程：　

1) 选择你希望使用的服务套餐

2) 使用下面的PayPal 链接来支付相关款项. *请注意：无需使用PayPal 账号来购买服务．　Visa, Mastercard以及 American Express 等信用卡同样可以被接受

3) 如果你使用文书互动修改服务或深度润色服务，　请在支付后２４小时内通过电子邮件发送你的文章到stanfordeditor1@gmail.com．　如果你使用起始创作服务，　我会在２４小时内联系你开始第一轮咨询．

4) 请注意:所有的联系请使用英语来交流（我无法阅读或书写中文）　; Please note: please only use English to contact or communicate with me, since I cannot read or write Chinese.

Personal Statement Editing Services

Rough Draft to Finish Package $100.00 Pure Editing Package $40.00 Get Started Package $70.00 RUSH Rough Draft to Finish Package $120.00 RUSH Pure Editing Package $60.00 RUSH Get Started Package $90.00

Feel free to contact me at stanfordeditor1@gmail.com with any questions or concerns.

Student Testimonials:

"I've applied to the New York University masters program the year before and I didn't get in. I knew this time around I needed to get professional help with my application. Thank you to Sara for working with me on my personal statement and helping me achieve my dreams of attending NYU."

- Laura, currently a Masters student at New York University

"The personal statement is the most important part for your graduate degree application and Sara's help was invaluable to me. At the very beginning, I tried a famous writing agency called "Shinewrite". At first glance, they made a lot of changes, but it was quite superficial or they just replaced your words with rhetoric. Sara's modification was right on the point, and she gave me many practical suggestions on the content that I could work on. She is really knowledgeable about what the admission officers value most (she has a master degree from Stanford!), and her changes on particular words make my essays sound really native! "

--- Frank, currently an MBA student at University of Missouri

"I've applied to the New York University masters program the year before and I didn't get in. I knew this time around I needed to get professional help with my application. Thank you to Sara for working with me on my personal statement and helping me achieve my dreams of attending NYU."

- Laura, currently a Masters student at New York University

"I've wanted to be a doctor since I was a young child. Seeing that less than 3% of students are accepted to medical school, I asked Sara for help with developing my personal statement to make me stand out from the thousands of students. Without her expertise and assistance on my application, I would not be in medical school today. Thank you! "

- Emily, currently studying medicine at Western University of Health Sciences